'thul's story project...

[fool-ish]

It all sounds quite intriguing, though I don't quite understand Wulg's problem with understanding the difference between male and female. Were there no females around when he was growing up, other than his mother? And I'd have thought with him being part-wolf (wolven, good name!) he would have strong instincts regarding the opposite sex? Perhaps he should be just wary rather than confused? Unless you intend to create a gay character or even an asexual type? Or someone who's born to be a warrior and forsakes all else to that end? Well you did say to comment! I feel like I'm picking on poor Wulg now, though!

I think I've just about grasped the different types of beings, clans etc. and where they are based. An interesting mix and even more so if they can co-exist, though I suspect there will be conflict too! And there be dragons! I will need an appendix